First Impressions Editorial Assessment

Is Your Manuscript Making the Right First Impression?
You’ve poured your heart into your opening chapters—but will they hook an agent, captivate a reader, or stand out in a crowded market? Professional feedback isn’t a luxury; it’s the strategic edge that transforms promising drafts into publishable work.

Jiali Media’s First Impressions Editorial Assessment gives you exactly that: a concise, industry-savvy review of your first three chapters. We don’t just copyedit; we analyze your story through the lens of acquisition editors and savvy readers, providing you with clear, actionable insight to refine your pitch, strengthen your narrative, and elevate your confidence.

Here’s What You’ll Receive:
✅ A professional editorial review written in Jiali Media’s authoritative voice.
✅ Analysis of your Hook, Characters, Prose, Market Position & Series Potential.
✅ A clear “Verdict” section—perfect for your query letter or marketing materials.
✅ Delivered as a polished, branded PDF within 7–10 business days.

Who This Is For:
• Debut authors preparing to query agents.
• Self-publishing authors who want to ensure a strong opening.
• Writers feeling stuck or unsure about their story’s direction.
• Any author seeking professional, compassionate, and market-aware feedback.

Package Options 

Variant 1: The Manuscript Diagnostic
Price: $97
Perfect for the author who wants focused, high-level feedback.
• 1-2 page (300-400 word) concise review.
• Identifies your Core Strength & Biggest Opportunity.
• Includes one key market comparison.
• Final “Verdict” paragraph.
• Delivered as a branded PDF.

Variant 2: The Publishing Blueprint (Most Popular)
Price: $247
Our flagship assessment—comprehensive insight for the serious author.
• Full editorial review (500-700 words) in Jiali Media’s signature format.
• Detailed analysis of Hook, Character, Prose, Market Position & Series Potential.
• Professional “Verdict” suitable for queries or marketing.
• Delivered as a polished, branded PDF.

Variant 3: The Publishing Blueprint + Strategy Session
Price: $397
For authors who want feedback plus a personalized action plan.
• Everything in The Publishing Blueprint.
• PLUS a 45-minute private video consultation.
• We’ll review feedback, brainstorm revisions, and map your next steps.
• Follow-up email with summarized action items.

FAQ 

Q: How does this work after I purchase?
A: Within 24 hours of your purchase, you’ll receive a welcome email with a secure upload link for your first three chapters (up to 10,000 words) and a brief questionnaire about your goals. Your assessment will be delivered via email within 7–10 business days.

Q: What genres do you review?
A: We specialize in commercial fiction: Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Romance, Thriller, Mystery, YA, and upmarket/literary fiction. Non-fiction query is welcome on a case-by-case basis.

Q: Is my work safe with you?
A: Absolutely. Your manuscript remains your intellectual property. All files are handled securely, and we offer a confidentiality agreement upon request.

Q: What’s your turnaround time?
A: Standard delivery is 7–10 business days from the date you submit your materials. Rush service may be available upon inquiry.

Q: Can I use your review in my query letter?
A: Yes! The “Verdict” section is crafted to serve as a compelling blurb for your query or book marketing.

Q: What if I’m not satisfied?
A: We stand by the quality of our analysis. If you feel the assessment did not meet the described service, contact us within 7 days of delivery for a review and potential partial refund.

Limited Launch Offer:
Be one of our first 20 Founding Authors and receive 25% off!
Use code JIALIFIRST25 at checkout.

See a Sample Review:

Jiali Media Inc. Editorial Review by April Thomas

Why Choose Jiali Media?
• Professional Insight: Our reviews are crafted from an industry perspective.
• Clarity & Compassion: We deliver honest feedback that empowers, not discourages.
• Fast Turnaround: Get actionable insights in days, not months.
• Your Success is Our Success: We’re invested in helping you move forward with confidence.

Ready to see your opening chapters through a publisher’s eyes?
Select your package, upload your chapters, and let’s craft a stronger story together.